Rephrasing

Fixes #13

research.tex

@@ -68,29 +68,33 @@ A few ideas to get started:
     This gives you karma, experience, and maybe even co-authorship.
 \end{enumerate}
 
-After roughly one year,
-the next step is to sign a
-\enquote{doctoral agreement (Promotionsvereinbarung)}
-with your advisor.
-This is required by law (LHG BaWü §38 (5)).
+The steps to become an \emph{official} doctoral researcher are:
+\begin{enumerate}
+  \item You and your advisor sign a doctoral agreement (Promotions\-vereinbarung)
+  \item Send signed doctoral agreement to the faculty
+  \item Register at KHYS
+  \item Apply for acceptance at the faculty
+\end{enumerate}
+
+You should start this process after roughly one year
+and the doctoral agreement might limit the time until step four.
+The doctoral agreement is required by law (LHG BaWü §38 (5)).
 There are a few requirements what must be in there
 and the faculty has a template.
 However, this is a contract between you and your advisor.
 You are free to change it
-and we encourage you to negotiate.
+and we encourage you read carefully and to negotiate.
 In rare cases,
 this leads to conflict with your advisor.
 Be glad, you found out already!
 
 \checkitem{Looked into doctoral agreement stuff}
 
-After about two years,
-you should be officially accepted as a candidate by the faculty.
-This requires some paper work
-and even to chose a provisional title for your thesis.
+The doctoral agreement requires a provisional title of your thesis.
 You can easily change it, so don't let this discourage you.
-Being officially accepted mostly gives you some security.
-If you advisor is run over by a bus,
+
+Being officially accepted gives you some security.
+If your advisor is run over by a bus,
 the faculty is still responsible for you and your thesis.
 
 \checkitem{Officially accepted as PhD candidate by faculty}